Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Poem #12-2012 Death From Above

Hovering
black-and-white death
a few false drops
teasing the watery prey
then, head first, at
bullet speed
Spaaaa-looossssh (talons first)
Wet pause
airborne again -
one quick hover and shake

Look -  a flying fish !




Contributed to dVersePoets.com
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5 comments:

  1. Oh man, the close is just brilliant.

    Really, that's pretty great right there.

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  2. no where near as fun as the ones flying by the cruise ship...and a quick end when the beak breaks the back...

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  3. Smart pen...twisted me with the finish

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