Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Poem #5-2013 Forest Haiku

Symptom of nature
I walk through the piney woods
Through myself darkly












                                   Submitted to Dversepoets.com Open Link Night #96

6 comments:

  1. it is oft
    i find myself
    in the pine needles
    underfoot.

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  2. Nothing compares to the scent of a pine wood when the sun is pushing through it. But this is about more than a casual walk...and the self we commune with isn't always easy to talk with.

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  3. Ahh, a very nice walk through the pine needles. Lovely Haiku.

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  4. my favorite place in the world is among the coastal redwoods in northern cali..there is a scent and sensation of primordial. nice haiku, too.

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  5. Nature's dark piney woods, within. Makes me want to breathe deep.

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